I often have ideas that never develop farther than a phrase. I call these “Poetic Nuggets”. Sometimes I’ll begin writing a story or poem and stop after a single line because I simply don’t know what to write next. I’ll try and turn some into haikus or shape them into another style, but I find I am never pleased with the finished product. So I leave them as nuggets.
Here is a nugget I wrote recently. I had originally planned on writing a long, descriptive poem about the senses, but I stopped after four lines and added it to my Poetic Nugget collection.
Synesthesia
I don't have synesthesia,
but strangely moonlight tastes
of Earl Grey tea
and smells of lavender.
Synesthesia is one of my favorite poetic devices. You created synesthesia quite effectively, actually, with that. I did see-smell moonbeams of bergamont!
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